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i hope you find someone who loves you for your scars.

your scars are the battles you fought
alone, scared, broken at midnight
navigating the map of your lost soul,
wearing nothing but threadbare dreams,
with demons who would not die,
and who could not rest.
and still strong, you fought on.

i pray you find someone who loves you for your scars

your scars will tell the stories your lips cannot.
your scars will reveal secrets your heart cannot.
your scars will create meaning to the little things you do.
so find someone who loves you for your scars.
this is all that I can pray for, for you
and for you,
and for you...
I wish everyone in the world had someone who loves them for all their scars and heartbreaks. :hug:
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desearu Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2014
I want to add that the line "and still strong, you fought on" might be the best line you can say to those who self-harm. Maybe the poem isn't only directed to those, since scars that tell ones past can also be inflicted by others or even non-physical ones, but that was what I thought of first.
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You might find my piece - The most unlovable man in the world to be of some interest, along with the sequel.  Be sure to check out the audio links. :)
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desearu Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
Such a strong impression.
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MusicIsMyLife7 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Student Artist
Beautiful
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iMariposa Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for your prayer, that's my prayer too Takuma Hachimine (Smile) [V1] 
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autogestion Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
some people try to damage us
and then claim the damage will make us unlovable
secretly what they fear
is that others will discover
that it is they who are unlovable
because of the damage they inflict on everyone
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Crystal-Magic13 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:tighthug:
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much! :)
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kaelamae Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Student Writer
Your writing is something of pure beauty, I pray that you never stop.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, my dear. :)
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FlowerOfTheForest Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Heart 
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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InterrogateMe Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014   Writer
I want to cry...
This is beautiful <3
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This reminds me of the quote: "A prayer for the broken heart kept in cages." That was Tennessee Williams, and it's one of my very favorite quotes.

This is just beautiful. :heart:
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copper9lives Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
A friend of mine once said that battle scars were sexy:
They spoke of life thoroughly lived.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Your friend is an awesome person. :heart:
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copper9lives Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, he was. I miss him dearly. For Jack
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Dead2Freedom Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014
the dream i need right now...
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
We all need dreams, for dreams give hope and hope keeps us alive.
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cristinalynn Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014
This is beautiful. True art doesn't always have to come with pictures, dances, or paintings. Sometimes words hold everything. Great job!
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MiriamMoon Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student
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I like this message...
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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elitenschwein Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014
That is really beautifully written. Thank you.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much! :)
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senwiz Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014
Wow! Very moving. I pray the same for you!!!
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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CastielMeow Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014
Very powerful. Wonderful job~ <3
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much!
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CastielMeow Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014
Of course~ ;u;
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ArcticWulff Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love this so much...good job!!
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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ArcticWulff Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
your welcome!
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ShadowHawk137 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You know. You understand. Good for you. A scar is a memory, marked for everyone else. If they see, you can share your story with them, that piece of your life. But not all scars are of the flesh. They can be within as well. We all carry those scars, and some can still be raw. But no one should fault you for them, because they also carry those scars. They should embrace each other for what they've done, what they've accomplished, and what they've lost. That's what true love is, and you know it. Good for you. And thank you for sharing it with everyone else.
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dovelyKim Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So beautifully text~!! Its real..
Thank you~! ♡
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks very very much!
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jaiho-saraichi Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
So so true and so beautifully written - thankyou
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much! :)
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SkylarkTheCat Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student General Artist
This is a beautiful poem.. Thank you. I'm trying to get people to understand me more but nobody really seems to understand that some things that I say are more serious than they take it. So thank you
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
really well written: Its heartfelt, it is sincere, and it is something which is really needed. When one takes into consideration the simple approach used and the way the metaphors and straightforward approach is utilized in this poem - its worth the while honestly :thumbsup: All in all, a well written work. I mean it. Keep writing, and keep posting. And stay blessed: You deserve these prayers as much as everyone else does.
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mintybreeze Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
This is beautiful. Thank You.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, dearest!
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VonDaShroom Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So heart-warming! I count myself insanely lucky I have just such a person in my life, and even more lucky to have found someone on dA who could actually express this in words!! Thank you this is beautiful Panda Emoji-07 (Snuggy) [V1] 
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awww, thank you! :)
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The-Filthy-Harlot Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014
Fucking epic. Thank you.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank YOU!
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The-Filthy-Harlot Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014
It was beautiful. 
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NoxElohim Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014
Very nicely said
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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stisax Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014
So beautiful ! ♥︎♥︎
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