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"Ever worried about what the world thought of you?"

"Nope. I only worry about what I think of me."

"What do you think about you?"

"That I am a broken-eyed, converse-reject-wearing wise ass."

"Really? And what do you call yourself?"

"I call me proud."

"Oh."

"What do you call yourself?"

"I am the grade school version of the heartbroken girl, who can't play the guitar so she strums a ukulele instead, who can't paint so she draws terrible pictures in graphite that keeps giving way."

"I see you doing it again. Put the fucking pen down right now and stop it."

"Stop what?"

"Doing that."

"What? I was just writin-"

"You're cutting yourself to pieces with shark-toothed words again. Just because a sword is a beautiful, glittering object of honour doesn't mean it always has an honorable purpose."

"Do you really think I am a sword?"

"Nope. I think you're beautiful, glittering object of honour. And the thing with honour is, it makes the world turn to stare in awe."
So somebody stole my words today. He claims he wrote them. I was about to stop writing all together, and then I realised, that means he wins. He isn't going to take down my words.

I wrote this piece of Honour to remind myself what it means, and how what is honourable (the truth) always manages to win somehow. That there will always be justice in the world, even when you cannot see it.

EDIT: And he pulled down all the work! Thank you guys!! I could not have done this without your help!
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breezybrutality Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I could probably favorite your work all day but I must go to sleep
(Please let me sleep TAT)
You just have this way of turning things into stories and I want to consume them all--in a respectable manner of course, I don't steal pieces because that's dirty >:V
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read-draw-music Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That was so beautiful, you have such a way with words!
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ancientpoet Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012
"Honor and Pride" can do terrible things, but I know what you mean, you might read my poem by that name though if you will.

Patrick
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tiraluv Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012
"I see you doing it again. Put the fucking pen down right now and stop it."

"You're cutting yourself to pieces with shark-toothed words again. Just because a sword is a beautiful, glittering object of honour doesn't mean it always has an honorable purpose."
This reminds me so much of my best friend that I'm going to send the link to her RIGHT NOW. I used to date this guy that I haven't completely figured out how to live without (it's weird, completing a thought without his opinion) but he didn't understand me on the important things. He'd tell me it was just my ego or I was being stupid about something and I ended up believing him. I'd stop talking and tear myself down with my words. My bestie is not above using angry words (and a well placed smack) to stop me before describing me in a million wonderful ways. The guy who stole your work should be ashamed of himself. You are a great writer and I'm glad that you chose to continue even before the watcher army conquered :)
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astrangeallure Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You have a way with words...I love it...shame on the writing thief...I don't get the why of that. Anyways, beautiful piece...!! :) :love:
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KreepingSpawn Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
"There will always be justice in the world, even when you cannot see it."
Right on!
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Maerd7733SCAIP Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't believe I missed this! Someone actually dared to steal your writing?! Aadlihbsrflhibsrfhbilvbhilv I will mess up his face.

Beautiful, as always :)
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nightlyfurious Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Student General Artist
*speechless*


Great work anyway :)
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iceblade56 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012
I can't believe someone would do that! But your work is simply amazing, so... I guess someone would feel the need to do that. Well, it's flattering I suppose. :/ I'm glad he quit :)
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cLaIrEbY Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012
Beautiful piece. Well done for using something that hurt you to create something new and lovely :)
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