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Dear Boy with the Broken Eyes.


Just because they have always said it, things have always been difficult. And they are right. Life has always been difficult. Things will never happen the way you want them to happen. Broken hearts are so much easier to find than mended ones. And dreams? Well, if the world ran on dreams, we'd be building a whole new universe already, just to escape our own jaded one.

When I met you, you had already seen the worst of this world. They told you that you were not allowed to love because you couldn't do it the right way. They informed you that you weren't a poet, just a vagabond with tragic fingers on a broken instrument. They explained to you that you couldn't rise above anything because you just weren't special. And that every step of the way, they would be breaking you down, just to watch you fall.

Of course, they didn't mention that when you speak, your voice holds a lost song within it. And when you sleep, your guitar is an inch away from you, just so you can hear it in your dreams. And when you smile a smile from poet's lips, any writer would want to write an ode to you. And that your eyes are always closed when you first hear someone speak, just to understand the rhythm of their voice. That every time your voice lifts, the wind gods themselves stop at your door to listen, because your music is like magic.

They wouldn't mention it. Because that would mean they would have to admit they were wrong. That you are incredible.

Just because they have always said it, things have always been difficult. And they are right. Life has always been difficult. However, when it comes to you, they have been and always will be, dead wrong.

And maybe one day, I can make you realise that you are one of the few things that they are dead wrong about.


Love always,
The Girl who is Determined to Make You Smile
100 Themes Challenge: Dead Wrong

Because we all need someone to believe in us completely, especially when we stop believing in ourselves.
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FlyingSharky45 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
I am in love with this.
This describes my boyfriend perfectly, I teared up from reading this.
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HeavenlyClouds Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
aw i like this xD
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LlehNevaeh Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011
hey Determined!
i'm writing just to inform you i've stolen your artwork. Well, not really. But almost.
i translated this into my language and gave it to my little friend. and then, finally, after one day, you made him go out of his room. its oh so incredible what you've done for me, i'm not sure what to do, but just thought that i'll let ya know.
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NathiiG Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2011
Love it!
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gauravdott Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011
You are awesome, do you know that?
Well again beautiful!
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Awww, thank you so much, Gaurav. It is most kind of you to say that. :)
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gauravdott Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011
:hug:
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xXRustPuddingXx Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011
I really liked it. :) Very touching.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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OftheNewMoon Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I've been gone so I didn't get to see this until now and it is beautiful!
There needs to be more people out there to beleive in the lost and broken
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Hi there! Yes, I noticed you were away, I missed your comments! They're always so encouraging! I'm so glad you read this. Thank you! :glomp:
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xXxFallenDreamerxXx Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011
It's beautiful. Your words are always so awesome, I sometimes wish I permanently carry them with me. Thank you for writing.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for reading my work. Today, I really needed to read a comment like this. I feel a little bit broken. :hug:
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xXxFallenDreamerxXx Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011
Aw, I'm sorry you feel that way. :( Feel better soon, ok hun? :hug:
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haggard85 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
I...the words escape me. But you are what a friend should always be. I hope this finds his heart and relights his flame. It put a little more fuel to mine.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I always look forward to your comments, Neil. Thank you so much. I always think that friends should be people who believe in you when no one else does... :)
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KarlyBug6 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011
I love your writing so much. It is amazing, and I am quite jealous that I don't have the literary talent that you possess. This is amazing. :happybounce:
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sure you write absolutely beautifully and are just being nice. :hug: Thank you for reading this and giving me so much encouragement! :hug:
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KarlyBug6 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
I try writing beautifully, but most of the things I cough up are dark and depressing :/ I love writing though, so I keep it up. Thing is, I'm too self-conscious to put any of it up on here.. :/
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Sometimes dark and depressing is beautiful as well. I only used to write dark poetry...and then, something snapped inside me and made me want to believe again. Do put up your work. I would love to read it. :)
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Obi-Revolution Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
Oh my.... So very touching. If this was written for someone in particular, that person is a very lucky individual.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! Well, I hope he is happy when I'm around, it's all I could ever want. :)
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Croatin Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011
As always, your writing takes my breath away. Please keep up the good work! You have the gift to transform words into a portal to somebody's life, and the talent to make that point of view tug at the heart strings of your readers.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for reading this piece. :hug: And your words took my breath away. They made me smile so wide my face hurts. Thank you! :)
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Croatin Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
Muahahaa, my ebil plan to break the faces of the epic writers of DA is well on its way towards completion. MUAHAHAA!
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Hahaha!!! :D
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TheGoryBananaFox Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're writing is too damn good...How do you make it so deep? Incredible stuff, once again c:
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! Well, I guess I'm just oversensitive in real life. It doesn't get me far in real life, but it makes for good writing. :)
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cosmosgoddess13 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011
I am in LOVE with the third paragraph. Seriously, great work.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much, love! I loved writing this. It's for someone really special. I really do believe the wind gods stop to listen to his voice. :) :hug: And how is the heat wave now? Gone?
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cosmosgoddess13 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
that's so sweet. The wave is gone! Now it's cool, and I'm loving it! Thanks for asking.
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bibarry Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011
Incredible.
Your writing is so well. :D
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for reading this! :)
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bibarry Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
My pleasure :D
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Torkuda Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011
This is pretty nice actually. I'll think about it in a few of my nicer stories.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :)
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bluemanjive Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011
Another great piece. I always look forward to reading your work. Keep 'em coming =).
BTW thank you for your concern and compassion regards the riots in the UK, it means alot.:hug:
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!

I am indeed worried. I have so many friends there and then I realised so many of the people on the site who I speak with regularly are from there too! You guys have become a lot like family. :hug: I hope the situation there is much better now.
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bluemanjive Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
Bless you hun :hug:, it all seems to quietening down now. There are going to be many ripples echoing around for some time. Hopefully some good will come out of it as well.
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Dark-In-Light Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011
Very touching. And It gave me chills. :)
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, Mo, for the encouragement! :hug:
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Dark-In-Light Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
Thank you for the beautiful piece. :D
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M3rcaptan Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
so beautiful... i added it to my favorites before reading it 'cause i know you always do a great job... hope u don't mind...
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for adding it to your favourites! That means so much to me! :hug:
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M3rcaptan Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
NP! I love everything you write! U R awesome!
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StArMigEt Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Another piece that I relate to completely. Really well done.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :D
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anilespada Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011
wow. just wow. i did not know you could write like that. this is beautiful. i dont really know what else to say except if you dont finish the100 themes challange i will personally kill you.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! Hahaha!!! I hope to finish it as well. My every effort is to manage to finish all the themes! Thanks so much for the encouragement! :D
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Sana-girl Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: I always click immediately on your writing when I see it in my inbox, and this time was no exception.

Exceptional
Beautiful
Lovely
Gorgeous
Amazing
Breathtaking
Inspirational
Heartwarming
Sweet
Masterpiece..

They dont even begin to cover what your work is
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