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I love your belief in God.

Not because it matches mine. 

Because it makes you even more beautiful to me.

You are the dream I always wanted, but never had. 

(God likes to surprise me. Well, consider me surprised.)

It makes me want to sleep every single night by your side.

I want to wrap my prayers around you.

I want to press my lips to the segments of your body. 

If you asked, I would rest my head besides yours

and dream your nightmares for you.

(You shudder in your sleep. I don't think you know.)

In faith, I'll be your dreamcatcher.
In dreams, let me wish all your nightmares away

You make this, meeting the parents, studying, job hunting, memories, broken hearts, happiness, sadness...all of this, easy. And on top of it all, you are my good luck charm too.

Love you from the very bottom of my heart,


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SereneCyrene Nov 9, 2013  Student General Artist
Hello! Your gorgeous piece has been featured here: :halfmoon: 
edge-of-psychosis Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This reminds me so much of all the things my boyfriend says to me. :heart: Lovely and perfect. :rose:
NotenSMSK Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Just beautiful! I love the work as a whole but the singly sentence:

"If you asked, I would rest my head besides yours

and dream your nightmares for you."

Made it a lot more brilliant for me. No critique over this; just very well written and good start, good end :)
Violet-Minds Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Making all these webs meet at the perfect time, it's astonishing still to see such love.

All the more becoming.
This really spoke to me, very intimate, very beautiful. Enjoying your work, thank you for the favourite on Inscrutable.
Such a wonderful peace of art.
xBrokenRecordx Sep 22, 2012  Student Writer
God loves to surprise me, too. So many things in my life that He has done that I seriously thought would never happen.

(For example: I kept the relationship with my boyfriend a secret from his parents and mine for six months because we'd thought they would completely drop dead from heart attacks. They found out in the most ridiculous of ways. They all laughed and told us that yeah, it was okay.

Surprise, surprise. God, I asked You to help me with it....You helped me with it >.>)

Anyways, this poem was beautiful. Brilliant job.
I realy envy you xD. Aniway i realy don't know wich is more beautifull, the poem or the description...Both I gues^^.
13th-ZodiaK Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's beautiful :smooch:

Everyone in my family twitches in their sleep to some degree or another. My sister, for example, will give an almighty shudder just as you begin to drift off.
Haha.....of course....there would be an error in my post. Must have been to long. All well........I guess it's fine........
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