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His caramel covered fingers caress my coffee skin
An epiphany aged in its own beautiful winery, 

A honeyed breath drawn in a moment so heated,
Its oven like intensity roasting any kind of chastity.



Irreverently juicy, pleasingly sinful,
Succulently divine in its every form
Lovemaking at its most beautiful…
Moans that echo sheer gluttony.

I never knew passion was edible,
nor lust so delicious in its impassioned call

Until he showed me why chocolate
is the most deadly sin of them all.
The first of my seven deadly sins series.

For K, for actually making me see past my own insecurities and feel beautiful from head to toe.

Every scar, every wound.
A new story, a new sound
A way of passion yet to be found.


Thank you, my beautiful tattooed boy, for making me feel so special, so cared for, so LOVED on a day that was so difficult and painful. :heart:




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:iconhammer777:
hammer777 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014
NOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOM*burp* I like Cadbury's
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growinluvhandles Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Student Writer
Beautifully expressed!
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:iconkaiju-popsicle:
Kaiju-popsicle Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Chocolate is actually this good. Yes.
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:iconaniwablue:
aniwablue Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow, well done! Very well compose!
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Now this is some writing from you that made me clap (not that I am much of a high ranking critic that it should matter). I love the expressions used. They are perfectly balanced and feel like on the verge of being totally veiled and unveiled.

Then there is the theme that has been handled. The first impression that one gets without reading the work is that it will be based over over eating or perhaps if the author is not an amateur (as was the case for you) there would be in-direct ways of telling the story and sinful pact of gluttony.

Yet when I read the first stanza I was laughing. It was so different yet it matched so well. The way you have integrated edibles in each action, the way you have produced the most tasty of things as the most sinful of all and the language you used. One of your best works that I have read till now. Just wonderful.
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the-neon-affairs Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Your words always tug strings at my heart...
I am always beyond ecstatic to see your deviations in my inbox.
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:iconrenovative:
Renovative Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautifully crafted an suculent you poses a natural talent.....
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:icongrowinluvhandles:
growinluvhandles Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Student Writer
That last verse -- perfect!
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:glomp: Thank you!!
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:iconcinders8328:
Cinders8328 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I like this!
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!! :heart:
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Cinders8328 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
no problem!
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:iconw-anderlust:
w-anderlust Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Student Writer
You guys are just fantastic, as is this piece of writing :)
I'm so happy
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awwww!! Thank you for saying that!! :hug:
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:iconw-anderlust:
w-anderlust Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Student Writer
You're very much welcome :huggle:
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:iconrojozorra:
Rojozorra Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
This is marvelous I can't wait to see the rest of the series! I'm in love with you for your words.
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for saying that to me. :hug: I love you!!
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:iconrojozorra:
Rojozorra Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
:smooch: Love you too that's why I am so honest with you.
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:iconhaphazardmelody:
haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful. Really well-crafted imagery. You're so talented.
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much from the bottom of my heart!! :D
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ariasgemini Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Chocolate is most definitely a most wonderful, irresistable sin :nod:

Can't wait to see more of the series!
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awww! Thank you! :D
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ariasgemini Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
^-^
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TigerRose1329 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Exquisite!
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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TigerRose1329 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! :-)
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imaterribledrawer Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I had to read it a few times to fully comprehend that it was about chocolate. Even so, that just proves how masterfully you can manipulate words to do your bidding.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for this lovely comment. :D
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imaterribledrawer Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem,I just can't wait to read the rest of the seven deadly sins :)
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:iconavield:
Avield Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Somehow after reading this... I felt violated.
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:lol:
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Avield Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
lol
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LoveAmongTheRuins Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
This is an incredible use of the English language. You really are talented with words and I can relate to the subject far too much. Well done.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for saying that. :D I am so flattered by your comment!
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LoveAmongTheRuins Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
You're very welcome.
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irrenderNarr42 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
WOWOWOW...looks like "K" is bringing up a hole new side of you, if never seen something like that from you...O_O
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
He is indeed. He makes me feel very...wicked. :P
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irrenderNarr42 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
woohoohoo^^
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SonicWolvelina99 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Chocolate is dangerous.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Chocolate is dangerous. :D
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mintybreeze Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
looking forward to the others in this series! I ENJOYED this very much, I'm a chocolate lover as well ;)
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! Chocolate is AWESOME. :P
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GodOfCoffee Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol id wanna get in bar with you so bad you gotta be fun to chat with
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hahahahahaha!! I am very alarming to chat to, this is true. :P
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GodOfCoffee Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dont tell anyone but I just got private messaging from Tara Strong in Twitter xD
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sumgie1 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
That's some intense imagery. I liked the "cofee skin" expression. :)
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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sumgie1 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012
You're welcome. :)
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:iconleongeds:
Leongeds Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Sounds more like Lust...
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