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His caramel covered fingers caress my coffee skin
An epiphany aged in its own beautiful winery, 

A honeyed breath drawn in a moment so heated,
Its oven like intensity roasting any kind of chastity.



Irreverently juicy, pleasingly sinful,
Succulently divine in its every form
Lovemaking at its most beautiful…
Moans that echo sheer gluttony.

I never knew passion was edible,
nor lust so delicious in its impassioned call

Until he showed me why chocolate
is the most deadly sin of them all.
The first of my seven deadly sins series.

For K, for actually making me see past my own insecurities and feel beautiful from head to toe.

Every scar, every wound.
A new story, a new sound
A way of passion yet to be found.


Thank you, my beautiful tattooed boy, for making me feel so special, so cared for, so LOVED on a day that was so difficult and painful. :heart:




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:icongrowinluvhandles:
growinluvhandles Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Student Writer
Beautifully expressed!
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Kaiju-popsicle Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Chocolate is actually this good. Yes.
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aniwablue Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow, well done! Very well compose!
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Now this is some writing from you that made me clap (not that I am much of a high ranking critic that it should matter). I love the expressions used. They are perfectly balanced and feel like on the verge of being totally veiled and unveiled.

Then there is the theme that has been handled. The first impression that one gets without reading the work is that it will be based over over eating or perhaps if the author is not an amateur (as was the case for you) there would be in-direct ways of telling the story and sinful pact of gluttony.

Yet when I read the first stanza I was laughing. It was so different yet it matched so well. The way you have integrated edibles in each action, the way you have produced the most tasty of things as the most sinful of all and the language you used. One of your best works that I have read till now. Just wonderful.
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the-neon-affairs Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Your words always tug strings at my heart...
I am always beyond ecstatic to see your deviations in my inbox.
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Renovative Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautifully crafted an suculent you poses a natural talent.....
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:icongrowinluvhandles:
growinluvhandles Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Student Writer
That last verse -- perfect!
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:glomp: Thank you!!
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Cinders8328 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I like this!
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!! :heart:
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