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He was unassumingly striking.
And he always made me feel magnificent.

He was beautifully broken.
And he always managed to make me smile.

He was wretchedly angry
And I never ever saw him in a temper.

He was sarcastically humourous.
And he never tried to outwit me.

He was always unhappy.
And he was forever happy when I was around.

He was my Anakin Skywalker.
And he didn't turn to the dark side for me, or for anyone else.

But for himself.
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Love and Loss. That is what I work with best, then.

(Also, huge Star Wars fan.)
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Mood: Love ~skruffy123 Aug 4, 2012  Professional General Artist
I love that you appreciate what you do, the allusion is great, and for the finale a kind of love that few know.
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Mood: Love ~dracoholic13 Aug 3, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
....i am speechless
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*UntamedUnwanted Aug 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
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~dracoholic13 Aug 3, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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~kuma13216 Jul 30, 2011  Student General Artist
I cannot explain how much your words speak to me. I have repeatedly hit the Favorite button. <3
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*UntamedUnwanted Jul 31, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: Thank you for taking the time to read my work. Thank you. :hug:
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~fire-angel79 Jul 9, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I have very much gone on a favorite rampage with your writing, but this one worked amazing with the Star Wars Reference. It feels terrible to watch someone you trusted destroy everything you once knew and loved.
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*UntamedUnwanted Jul 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Awwww, thank you. I loved writing this one, personally. Anakin Skywalker is both tragic and so selfish in my eyes.
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~Seinn Mar 18, 2011  Student Writer
This poem completely came together for me with the Star Wars allusion. That was so wonderful and witty. XD
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*UntamedUnwanted Mar 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. I loved Star Wars...and don't we all have a relationship which went a little Anakin Skywalker on us?
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