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"Hi, I'm-"

"I know who you are."

"You do?"

"You're the guy who thinks he's invisible."

"I have a name-"

"It isn't important. Because you really don't think it's important."

"All right. Since we've started out this way, let me just tell you, I know you too."


"You're the girl who is broken."

"I am not broken."

"You're the girl whose eyes close every night and open the next morning, only to find you have never slept at all."

"I sleep well. Besides-"

"You're the girl who dreams of a happy ending even though she has seen, eighteen unhappy ones in her eighteen years."

"Happy endings are over rated. And you're-"

"You're the girl who wants something bigger, something stronger, just so the weakness in her body becomes something so much more."

"You don't understand weakness the way-"

"You're the girl whose heart broke when she was so young, and she fixed it back together with superglue, but cannot ignore the cracks."

"Superglue makes for a good companion, especially when-"

"You're the girl who runs away from love and is always up for a good fight because anger is the only emotion she can deal with without being hurt."

"A fight makes me stronger."

"You're the girl whose eyes shine only when they are as intense as they can ever be."

"And when is that?"

"When you're telling someone you know exactly who they are before they can even know your name."
100 Themes : Introductions

EDIT: Holy crap, you guys!!! I just logged in idly this morning to see what was going on and almost logged out in fright, thinking I had accessed someone else's account! I am absolutely overwhelmed and speechless at all your wonderful comments and all the faves! Thank you all so much!!! :D :D :D
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Yuoaj009 Featured By Owner 5 days ago
Really good :). Well written.
Chasing-Moons3568 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016
I love this so much, like- you don't understand~ sdhkjsdg
PolarStriker Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2016  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
Whoa... Mind. Blown.
joy97 Featured By Owner Edited Oct 22, 2015
*stands up and claps intensively* WOW!
cityoftroy2 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2015  Student General Artist
Amazing wish i could write like this 
Kittinpaws Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*jaw drops and stays like that for a few moments then bigens to clap* wow you... this... just wow
slutsky11 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015
sounds like a skank to me
TakenVortex Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
thats fucked up man
AngelTully Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
That was beautiful 😢
JadaWise Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015
This is truly so beautiful, i am left speechless at how amazing this is.
McTalon Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very beautiful.
xxxScarletKittyxxx Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Woah. *Clicks fave button*
SurrealNacre Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
 that was intense and thought provoking.
I hate it when I'm telling somebody something (like the girl) and then they turn and point the finger at me (like the boy) you think you know them but you didn't know that they knew you too~ Very nice writing here.
pikawoo221B Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my god that was so, so beautiful.
RickWrites Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014
Well written and a great idea
aishiteimasuhideaki Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
FishingforKitty Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Happy cry (Tears of joy) :happycry: --- 50x50px Emoticon happycry im literally crying if i had to write/choose a poem that was me this would be it/really close to what i would write but so much prettier
LillyLionheart Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh holy crap this flashed me... <3
amateur-assassin Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
xRebornAgain46x Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
this is so beautiful omg
ZakuFox-Kun Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Professional Writer
This resonates with me on such a personal level. This is so beautiful.
GiuliValo Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Bbburn Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014
Um, It's cool if it means what i think it means-Im a bit confused at the very last line...explain in words for an idiot please?
Renh07 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013
I like the way you presented the story and the storyline was pretty awesome, in my opinion. Keep it up!
hate-to-be-17 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013
I love this.
amewaalk Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for this <3  shit.  im crying again.  i guess you should take that as a complement :P
artst04 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
Very strong
i-love-daisy Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
beautiful, i love it
xheraldxofxhopex Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
this is me.
bloodlustbunny Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it im broken but I know that
NuntiusDei Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
The only way to interrupt hurt is with love, which is what youth is essentially. I'm better for reading this.
luna-starlight Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oooooooo cool I wanna do something like this! :) nice job

MaristophEL Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
One word: wow!
BlackJudgement Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
*slow clap the awesomeness overload in me*
AngieTheCamel Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
You have inspired me deeply :)
Anahata-Crow Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sounds like my friends and myself. :3 I like this a lot. Keep up the good work!
IcyKitsuneStorm Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice!
Repinuj Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
Wow just wow amazing
justinpv225 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This piece shows intense emotion when a girl seems to be judged by an invisible force, (a critic such as me, perhaps?), and it presents it in a simple and easy to read format that clearly conveys how the conversation is carried on. Commendable. 4/5 stars.
dgriffinxl Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
Nice vignette. Good interplay. Interesting dynamic. Clear and concise. Nice work!
Rosewolf12 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
I must have favorited this 2 years ago.

It's truer now than ever, and i'm learning that more and more every day.  Thank you.
fanydragon Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's mind-blowingly amazing. It's short but terribly great. You definitely nailed it and I totally love it.
Emchan543 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
I'm so in love with this story. She's like me, and I'm stuck and I want to find a person who are able to tell me those words. This really touched my heart and I'm really thankful to have been able to read this introduction.
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