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"Hi, I'm-"

"I know who you are."

"You do?"

"You're the guy who thinks he's invisible."

"I have a name-"

"It isn't important. Because you really don't think it's important."

"All right. Since we've started out this way, let me just tell you, I know you too."


"You're the girl who is broken."

"I am not broken."

"You're the girl whose eyes close every night and open the next morning, only to find you have never slept at all."

"I sleep well. Besides-"

"You're the girl who dreams of a happy ending even though she has seen, eighteen unhappy ones in her eighteen years."

"Happy endings are over rated. And you're-"

"You're the girl who wants something bigger, something stronger, just so the weakness in her body becomes something so much more."

"You don't understand weakness the way-"

"You're the girl whose heart broke when she was so young, and she fixed it back together with superglue, but cannot ignore the cracks."

"Superglue makes for a good companion, especially when-"

"You're the girl who runs away from love and is always up for a good fight because anger is the only emotion she can deal with without being hurt."

"A fight makes me stronger."

"You're the girl whose eyes shine only when they are as intense as they can ever be."

"And when is that?"

"When you're telling someone you know exactly who they are before they can even know your name."
100 Themes : Introductions

EDIT: Holy crap, you guys!!! I just logged in idly this morning to see what was going on and almost logged out in fright, thinking I had accessed someone else's account! I am absolutely overwhelmed and speechless at all your wonderful comments and all the faves! Thank you all so much!!! :D :D :D
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i-love-daisy Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2017
It's saddening by how much i relate to this
Angelsrest Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2017
This reads like you have a spotlight inside my head. Your writing makes me feel exposed and vulnerable and sad and hopeless all at once as I weep for that unbroken child I never had the chance to know. Thank you.
Rubixlord Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2016  Student General Artist
This is a masterpiece, It says so much with so little.
xX-Strangeness-Xx Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I LOVE this~
WinterSong12 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
wow, amazing!
lAnital Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like Love 
EnderSamuel Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
This is great, it really captured me through it all. Great work! 
mousehatsandbowties Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
This is...simply beautiful.
CLCanadyArts Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2016  Professional General Artist
I really like that. :)
arty-izzy Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I became more captivated by the story as it went along. It was beautifully written and I enjoyed the format of the story.
PrettyGuardian1217 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2016  Student Filmographer
//cries evry tim// :cry:
lenorarosea Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful. I'm crying right now.
Purity116 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
It's pretty well written, but I can understand the surprise. Lovely concept! Well-done! ^^
Yuoaj009 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2016
Really good :). Well written.
Chasing-Moons3568 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016
I love this so much, like- you don't understand~ sdhkjsdg
PolarStriker Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Whoa... Mind. Blown.
PrettyGuardian1217 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2016  Student Filmographer
joy97 Featured By Owner Edited Oct 22, 2015
*stands up and claps intensively* WOW!
cityoftroy2 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2015  Student General Artist
Amazing wish i could write like this 
Kittin-The-Creator Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*jaw drops and stays like that for a few moments then bigens to clap* wow you... this... just wow
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TakenVortex Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
thats fucked up man
AngelTully Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
That was beautiful 😢
JadaWise Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015
This is truly so beautiful, i am left speechless at how amazing this is.
McTalon Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Student General Artist
Very beautiful.
xxxScarletKittyxxx Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Woah. *Clicks fave button*
SurrealNacre Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
 that was intense and thought provoking.
I hate it when I'm telling somebody something (like the girl) and then they turn and point the finger at me (like the boy) you think you know them but you didn't know that they knew you too~ Very nice writing here.
pikawoo221B Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my god that was so, so beautiful.
RickWrites Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014
Well written and a great idea
aishiteimasuhideaki Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
FishingforKitty Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Happy cry (Tears of joy) :happycry: --- 50x50px Emoticon happycry im literally crying if i had to write/choose a poem that was me this would be it/really close to what i would write but so much prettier
LillyLionheart Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh holy crap this flashed me... <3
amateur-assassin Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
xRebornAgain46x Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
this is so beautiful omg
IgnebrisFox Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This resonates with me on such a personal level. This is so beautiful.
GiuliValo Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Bbburn Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014
Um, It's cool if it means what i think it means-Im a bit confused at the very last line...explain in words for an idiot please?
Renh07 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013
I like the way you presented the story and the storyline was pretty awesome, in my opinion. Keep it up!
hate-to-be-17 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013
I love this.
amewaalk Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for this <3  shit.  im crying again.  i guess you should take that as a complement :P
artst04 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
Very strong
i-love-daisy Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
beautiful, i love it
xheraldxofxhopex Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
this is me.
bloodlustbunny Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it im broken but I know that
NuntiusDei Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
The only way to interrupt hurt is with love, which is what youth is essentially. I'm better for reading this.
luna-starlight Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oooooooo cool I wanna do something like this! :) nice job

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