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"Hi, I'm-"

"I know who you are."

"You do?"

"You're the guy who thinks he's invisible."

"I have a name-"

"It isn't important. Because you really don't think it's important."

"All right. Since we've started out this way, let me just tell you, I know you too."

"Yeah?"

"You're the girl who is broken."

"I am not broken."

"You're the girl whose eyes close every night and open the next morning, only to find you have never slept at all."

"I sleep well. Besides-"

"You're the girl who dreams of a happy ending even though she has seen seventeen...no, eighteen unhappy ones in her eighteen years."

"Happy endings are over rated. And you're-"

"You're the girl who wants something bigger, something stronger, just so the weakness in her body becomes something so much more."

"You don't understand weakness the way-"

"You're the girl whose heart broke when she was so young, and she fixed it back together with superglue, but cannot ignore the cracks."

"Superglue makes for a good companion, especially when-"

"You're the girl who runs away from love and is always up for a good fight because anger is the only emotion she can deal with without being hurt."

"A fight makes me stronger."

"You're the girl whose eyes shine only when they are as intense as they can ever be."

"And when is that?"

"When you're telling someone you know exactly who they are before they can even know your name."
100 Themes : Introductions

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AngelTully Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015  New member Hobbyist Artist
That was beautiful 😢
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JadaWise Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015
This is truly so beautiful, i am left speechless at how amazing this is.
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McTalon Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very beautiful.
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xxxScarletKittyxxx Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Woah. *Clicks fave button*
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DeviantArtist14 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Student General Artist
Wow.
 that was intense and thought provoking.
I hate it when I'm telling somebody something (like the girl) and then they turn and point the finger at me (like the boy) you think you know them but you didn't know that they knew you too~ Very nice writing here.
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pikawoo221B Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my god that was so, so beautiful.
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RickWrites Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014
Well written and a great idea
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aishiteimasuhideaki Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Awesome
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FishingforKitty Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Happy cry (Tears of joy) :happycry: --- 50x50px Emoticon happycry im literally crying if i had to write/choose a poem that was me this would be it/really close to what i would write but so much prettier
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LillyLionheart Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh holy crap this flashed me... <3
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amateur-assassin Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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xRebornAgain46x Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
this is so beautiful omg
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ZakuFox-Kun Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Professional Writer
This resonates with me on such a personal level. This is so beautiful.
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GiuliValo Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful.
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Bbburn Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014
Um, It's cool if it means what i think it means-Im a bit confused at the very last line...explain in words for an idiot please?
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Renh07 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013
I like the way you presented the story and the storyline was pretty awesome, in my opinion. Keep it up!
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hate-to-be-17 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013
I love this.
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amewaalk Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for this <3  shit.  im crying again.  i guess you should take that as a complement :P
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artst04 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
Very strong
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i-love-daisy Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
beautiful, i love it
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xheraldxofxhopex Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
this is me.
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bloodlustbunny Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it im broken but I know that
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NuntiusDei Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
The only way to interrupt hurt is with love, which is what youth is essentially. I'm better for reading this.
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luna-starlight Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oooooooo cool I wanna do something like this! :) nice job

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MaristophEL Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
One word: wow!
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BlackJudgement Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
*slow clap the awesomeness overload in me*
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AngieTheCamel Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
You have inspired me deeply :)
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Anahata-Crow Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sounds like my friends and myself. :3 I like this a lot. Keep up the good work!
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IcyKitsuneStorm Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice!
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Repinuj Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
Wow just wow amazing
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justinpv225 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This piece shows intense emotion when a girl seems to be judged by an invisible force, (a critic such as me, perhaps?), and it presents it in a simple and easy to read format that clearly conveys how the conversation is carried on. Commendable. 4/5 stars.
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dgriffinxl Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
Nice vignette. Good interplay. Interesting dynamic. Clear and concise. Nice work!
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Rosewolf12 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
I must have favorited this 2 years ago.

It's truer now than ever, and i'm learning that more and more every day.  Thank you.
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fanydragon Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow.
It's mind-blowingly amazing. It's short but terribly great. You definitely nailed it and I totally love it.
/bowdown/
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Emchan543 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
I'm so in love with this story. She's like me, and I'm stuck and I want to find a person who are able to tell me those words. This really touched my heart and I'm really thankful to have been able to read this introduction.
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AmayaZero Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love it, simply, I just love it. And it is a weird and wonderful sensation when something like this happens in life.
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Vinniex3 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013
I think this text is one of them, which you can read every time in your life.

It was really amazing to read this, and if you have written this (and i think you did!),you are awesome.

Awesome.
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Billrh Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
I first saw this picture years ago, and stumbled upon it again today.

It almost scares me, but this reminds me of a girl i've gotten to know. And if you go through and take away all of the psychoanalysis, it's exactly like the day we met. The things this piece talks about, especially the superglue...
But i think the best part is how her infinite courage gives her the heart to always be positive and upbeat even when i can hear the pain in her voice.

I just realized I'm falling in love with this girl.
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penguinlover777 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013
I love this. I cannot stop reading it over and over. I envy your talent and wish you could spare some for me <3
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pepkie Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Student Writer
Can I just say wow?
Here are some words that ran through my mind after reading this:

Amazing, emotional, surprising, amazing, raw...

Did I mention amazing?

Bravo mate!
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HardcoreDeadPrincess Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Student General Artist
That is WONDERFUL!! Great job, I love it! XD
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Darvia123 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ooooh WOW!
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boxlemon Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is like my favourite thing in the universe
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SilentHex96 Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
Love the way she starts out so strong and he takes over the conversation.
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