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March 17, 2011
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I painted.
You said I'm wasteful.
I sang.
You said I couldn't hold a tune.
I wrote.
You said I made no sense.
I danced.
You said I had two left feet.
I cried.
You told me I was ugly.

I will be amazing one day.
Just to make all of you wonder why you didn't get to know me better.
Depression seems to be inspirational at times.
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Or you could just drop the loser!  Wink/Razz 
DarkRiderDLMC Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
You were amazing the day you wrote this.  Having the blues can make you rich and famous if you add a little sweet guitar to them.

AnimalAmelia16 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's... that's... So beautiful you made me cry. *tries to smile* :) thank you
RueTris Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Photographer
You already are amazing.
GatitaZ Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very very inspirational. You are amazing, weather they can see it or not.
Helix7 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012
I love your writing, I'm slowly going through everything, and I'm amazed at how I can connect to your words.
LightOverpowers58 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Student Writer
At the risk of sounding like a broken are absolutely, positively, beautifully amazing.....that is all :P

But no honestly, you are... I tend to rave about your work to my friends and eventually they stop listening because I keep going and going and starting veering into your photography at some points is....ridiculous =P

So, I sat down at my computer screen and started searching through my page trying to find something to critique (:shrug: I like encouraging awesome writers) and after going through three or four works, found myself dissatisfied with the works I was reading, no fault of the writers though. So, I decided to browse your gallery and maybe finally give an in-depth comment on one of your works...

Forty minutes later I believe I have read nearly every single writing in your gallery.... have tears falling from my eyes at the sheer beauty in your words.... and still managed to not leave a single constructive comment.... I think I should just give up....

You're work is.....stunning (in a Pokemon sort of I-can't-move way)..... it leaves me speechless, breathless, and full of hope.... and so, I cannot critique it......and it's killing me because your work is so amazing I honestly want to analyze it and break it down to its roots then find what appeals to me so much....but I can't..... so, I have settled on simply leaving this comment for you to read whenever you find it in your inbox that is probably full to the brim.

If you end up reading down this far, just know that you are not have people who admire, love, and care for you...everywhere in the world..... you are never alone....

Sorry for the rather long ramble but I dunno, for some reason it is a therapeutic ritual for me to explore your gallery and I just wanted to thank you for're writing gives me peace in a time where all my mind wants to do is destroy my soul and my thank you....
isinglots Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You are incredibly talented. I get chills whenever I read your works.
MMAERA Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
my story :( :( :(
shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
"When life puts you down, STAND UP!" is something we all tend to ignore. This however is something different. Here by the time I reached the ending the moral I learnt was "When people put you down, saying your not what you think you are, say nothing. WORK EVEN HARDER".

Never knew your poetry was just as energizing as your prose. You really are a professional :) .
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