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I painted.
You said I'm wasteful.
I sang.
You said I couldn't hold a tune.
I wrote.
You said I made no sense.
I danced.
You said I had two left feet.
I cried.
You told me I was ugly.

I will be amazing one day.
Just to make all of you wonder why you didn't get to know me better.
Depression seems to be inspirational at times.
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Or you could just drop the loser!  Wink/Razz 
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DarkRiderDLMC Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
You were amazing the day you wrote this.  Having the blues can make you rich and famous if you add a little sweet guitar to them.

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AnimalAmelia16 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's... that's... So beautiful you made me cry. *tries to smile* :) thank you
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RueTris Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Photographer
You already are amazing.
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GatitaZ Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very very inspirational. You are amazing, weather they can see it or not.
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Helix7 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012
I love your writing, I'm slowly going through everything, and I'm amazed at how I can connect to your words.
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LightOverpowers58 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Student Writer
At the risk of sounding like a broken record.....you are absolutely, positively, beautifully amazing.....that is all :P

But no honestly, you are... I tend to rave about your work to my friends and eventually they stop listening because I keep going and going and starting veering into your photography at some points too...it is....ridiculous =P

So, I sat down at my computer screen and started searching through my page trying to find something to critique (:shrug: I like encouraging awesome writers) and after going through three or four works, found myself dissatisfied with the works I was reading, no fault of the writers though. So, I decided to browse your gallery and maybe finally give an in-depth comment on one of your works...

Forty minutes later I believe I have read nearly every single writing in your gallery.... have tears falling from my eyes at the sheer beauty in your words.... and still managed to not leave a single constructive comment.... I think I should just give up....

You're work is.....stunning (in a Pokemon sort of I-can't-move way)..... it leaves me speechless, breathless, and full of hope.... and so, I cannot critique it......and it's killing me because your work is so amazing I honestly want to analyze it and break it down to its roots then find what appeals to me so much....but I can't..... so, I have settled on simply leaving this comment for you to read whenever you find it in your inbox that is probably full to the brim.

If you end up reading down this far, just know that you are not alone...you have people who admire, love, and care for you...everywhere in the world..... you are never alone....

Sorry for the rather long ramble but I dunno, for some reason it is a therapeutic ritual for me to explore your gallery and I just wanted to thank you for that....you're writing gives me peace in a time where all my mind wants to do is destroy my soul and my heart.....so thank you....
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isinglots Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You are incredibly talented. I get chills whenever I read your works.
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MMAERA Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
my story :( :( :(
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
"When life puts you down, STAND UP!" is something we all tend to ignore. This however is something different. Here by the time I reached the ending the moral I learnt was "When people put you down, saying your not what you think you are, say nothing. WORK EVEN HARDER".

Never knew your poetry was just as energizing as your prose. You really are a professional :) .
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: You are much too kind, love! Thank you for these wonderful words. :)
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
your welcome.

Write poetry more often. :)
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KarlyBug6 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011
I love this :] I have gone through bouts of depression also, and it is kind of odd how it can bring out the most creative and inspiring artistic talent in a person.. :depressed:
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I know. :(

:hug:
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Emily-White Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011   Photographer
whoa. this is so great, i know exactly what you mean
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SilverMoonRising Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You already are amazing.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You are too kind. I am nothing. I hope to be something one day. :)
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SilverMoonRising Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Everyone is something. Some more than others. You're one of the better ones.
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HikariSama2007 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it always is... pain is so beautiful that with the right words, you can make a rose feel ugly.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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:iconthrima:
Thrima Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2011
This should be deviation of the month! So encouraging!
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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xz791 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2011
Don't they say that some of the best creations come from depression?
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
They do. Depression is inspiring somehow.
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MeMark2 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011
I agree, depression is very inspirational. I'm a musician and I've written all my best songs while depressed.
Kind of depressing actually. xP
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. It's always worked that way for me too. Nice to know I'm not alone. :)
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MeMark2 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2011
You're welcome. :D
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ViXenEss Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011
Whoa, I really like that.
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BurningRoseBud Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2011
amazing, really amazing, it makes me want to be better just to show people that hurt me how wrong they were
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! People are horrible. We're the ones who need to be awesome. :)
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BurningRoseBud Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2011
agreed:)
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Maxteg Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
:)
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peachie2 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011  Student
WOW.... Hurtful stuff, digs deep into the soul.... Should have left this SOB long ago......
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. Yeah, sometimes people just don't try to understand you. :(

:hug:
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peachie2 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011  Student
There needs to be magic in a relationship... This energy needs to be flowing in both directions between both parties in the mix... But then again I see lots of goofy relationships.... ;-)
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:lol: agreed!
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what-simon-says Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011
f**k the haters. i like this c:
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. And I agree! :glomp:
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loqutor Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011
:| ....stop stealing writing ideas from my head.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
LOL!!! :ninjabattle: :glomp:
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loqutor Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011
Yeah, I can't wait to see the looks on their faces when I give them my law firm's business card and introduce them to my supermodel wife. :D

Somebody called you ugly? What were they, blind?
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
LOL, me too, except mine's a design firm. Wouldn't mind a gorgeous supermodel wife, though. :D

:( Yeah, people have called me ugly, and the bucktooth girl and the wierdo and the bi-skank too in the past. It hurts, but it's all behind me now. :)
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loqutor Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011
Only one person has ever called me ugly: a skinny black kid who had an intense hatred for me for reasons that I still can't figure out. On the other hand, I got more than my share of swirlies, locker-stuffings, trippings, and shoves down the stairs. The only good that came of it is that I worked so hard at resisting them, it's now almost impossible to trip me. :D When people called me a weirdo, though, I took it as a compliment. :XD: I'm fucking insane, and proud of it.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: I think I just fell in love with you. :D
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loqutor Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011
:iconinluvplz: YAAAAAYYYYY!!! :iconpineappletardplz:
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wildmagic13 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011
Wow. Short, sweet, to the point, and entirely honest. I have felt the same way- someday, we will show them all (: :+favlove:
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. Yes, there will come a day when we can show them how much they have missed out on. :)
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ilikedflaffybetter Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011
man have i been there. i cant wait for my ten year high school reunion so i can show people how much better they should have treated me.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Me too! I can't wait either! And after a while of thinking on it, I know how much I want it so I can get back at them ALL! :D
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ilikedflaffybetter Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011
right on! i just graduated last year so it gonna be a wile, but i'm really looking forward to it.
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