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His hands have a habit of finding my hip bones,
trailing his river like fingers along my stone smooth skin,
his lips do not move, his mouth tells me stories.

Mine spend their time
tracing the length and breadth
of his back in kisses*


We travel through lands that never existed
before we touched them
At temperatures far exceeding in Fahrenheit

If only we could understand
how lust and geography
make such divinely sinful bedmates.



____________________
* One hundred and sixteen
Want to know something funny?

I hated geography in school.



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BadHabitS2 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013
wow .. just wow .. just wow.
i write too .. ima take your opinion on somethin' in the nearest chance. u.u
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izzy3301 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
His hands have a habit of finding my hip bones, 
trailing his river like fingers along my stone smooth skin, 
his lips do not move, his mouth tells me stories.


LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Chapel-Horde Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The imagery has found success as a poem.
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morbidthrall Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012
Such divine beauty renewing.
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Lumenovus Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I might have liked it, if that were the type of geography we learned. What a wonderful, sensual poem. Creating your own lands... I feel a resonance with that idea. I'm happy for you, that you have had experiences to inspire something like this.
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hmm... short and simple. I am glad actually that it is not well... erotic ^^;. Having said that I like it since very such poem gives the impression or psychology of the author and what he/she percieves. You took a different approach that gave a different perspective over what you consider love or perhaps how YOU percieve it. The Italic portion worked well and I am genuinly surprised how you managed to pull 116... actually it explains the intensity of love... in my opinion :hmm:

The last stanza also concluded the whole work rather well... especially as you discussed geography which you hated at school. Good work :squee:
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AMPEugenie Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012
very interesting
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forestmeetwildfire Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
the asterisk/footnote is definitely something i haven't seen in a poem before (:
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NianLauri Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012
Seductive and beautifull in the same time. Realy love it.
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crystelclear1104 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Such beauty and grace in a seductive poem. Love it!
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