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“I have issues.”

“That’s a revelation.”

“No. Seriously. I have issues.”

“All right. I’ll bite. What’s going on?”

“I don’t think I’m ever going to find someone who’ll love me.”

"..."

“What? Why're you looking at me like that?”

“You aren’t serious, right?”

“I am glad my pain makes you so incredulous.”

“All right, let me try this again. If you can't find someone who loves you, who am I to you?”

“You’re-”

“Don’t answer that. That was rhetorical. I am the girl who spends hours huddled in a corner of a library, trying to find what you love the most about Marlowe, just so I can write you a poem worthy of Shakespeare. I’ve made books my lovers, hours my enemies and you the only story.”

“You do that for-”

“I am the girl who will split her fingers in two and let the ink fall on pages and pages, just so I can paint you a review. All this just so it may make more sense to you, than that art teacher who disregards your Rubenesque, Rembrandt inspired paintings everyday. And I don’t even like classical art.”

“Why-”

“I am the girl that has watched you break her, over and over and over again, but I am still here. My wrists are thinner, my spine arched in burden of the unspoken and the fact that I am terrified to touch an instrument anymore, simply because you hate the idea of a song that is about heartbreak. And heartbreak is all I can write about.”

“Why are you telling me this now?”

“Because I am done being in love with you.”

“Why?”

“I am in love with someone else. Someone who needs it more than you.”

“Who?!”

“Me.”
Love yourself enough to have self respect. Boyfriends and girlfriends comes second after your self respect and confidence.

Another old piece. I am fine...just need to let some stuff out. Sometimes you remember things that make you angry. This was written in a moment of anger.



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A-Shadow-Rose Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:la::clap: Yessssss! Just yes, I love this!
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:love: :iconclapplz:
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AerialGeoDuck75 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist
Very powerful, you're ability to express feelings in writing is incredible.
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Flermigan Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
This is so powerful. I love the way the conversation seems to escalate in annoyance and finally ends with acceptance. It's just wonderful. Creative and touching. You're writing is inspirational. :heart:
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PyroNinja999 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
All of your writing is wound around all of my bones.  I can sink into your words like the ocean waves and let them crash over me, and not be afraid of drowning.  Your simplicity is beautiful :heart:
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emmankt Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ok, I just started crying. And I'm not an easy cryer. I'm going through a rough phase, and this is simply beautiful. Thank You.
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weirdandproudofit Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Student Artist
Amazingly insightful. And I love the message behind it. Your pieces are always painfully beautiful. 
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Kailani-e Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Amazing. I am breathtaken. I love how this is written, and I love the ending. Especially because most girls think that we are meant to give away our souls and lives and hearts to men, and we don't leave enough for ourselves. And this was absolutely amazing. ^_^ Even your anger is beautiful.
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WorldExplorer296 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Truly amazing writing. Wow
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Crystal-Magic13 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

I wish the world worked as well as your art,

and that conversations flowed as smoothly.

Life would be an easier thing to be part of.

If it were so, I might even say I could be proud,

to be part of a life like a fairy tale. :huggle:

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