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You take mouthfuls of me
Huge, selfish as they are
Leaving morsels of me behind
Teeth my words and chew up my heart
Bite through my spine with shark like jaws
I am used, you explain, damaged,

Dirty.

Dirty for existing.
Dirty for loving you.

I ask you why you like to hurt me.

"I love you most when you ache on the inside."

I have never hated myself more.
Hold it in a little bit longer...

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Crystal-Magic13 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

You know, I didn't even recognize this as your art,

but I was still drawn to it. Than I recognized your

icon, and I think 'Well duh. Who else could write

like that?' :hug: You're one of the best writers I

can relate to.

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izzy3301 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
LOVE IT
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Lawlessness45 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Holy crap. "I love you most when you ache on the inside." That line struck me to my core. 
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SpiritDuchess Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
Such exquisite conciseness.
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angelichope Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
Boy can I ever relate!!!!:D
It's a wonderful poem!!:heart:
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Painapurru Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013
Impeccable. I am, yet again, stunned by you, my dear. I hope you're doing alright and that you yourself never lose sight of your worth since, I dare say, you're worth quite a lot.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much, my dear. :hug:
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DarkroomDilation Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013   Photographer
f***ed up. love it.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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confidenceAlive Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
As always, you have such a talent in expressing such...pain..what only one once- broken heart can share to another (but aren't we all a little broken-hearted, and chipped 'round the edges?) I can almost relate. Almost. And perhaps it's that I don't want to admit how true it feels, because if it were true, it would be terrible. But "I have never hated myself more." and I can't decide if I'm the user, or the used.
Hmm... Don't mind my rambling :P Suffice it to say, I think this poem is lovely, in a terrible sort of way.
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