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1. I am not writing a list of things that will make me hate you, as you supposed, but more a list that would help me move on. I always hated how you were very practical that way, even about emotional distress. I am not writing about the trouble with you being your incorrigible logic, your lack of tact.

2. I am not writing this because I have a habit of doing what you say, and perhaps, just maybe this would give me closure.

3. I am not going to write about how beautiful your mouth is, and how it seems like something that would have been kisses by an angel.

4. I am not going to write about how your voice tremors when you speak of loneliness.

5. I am not going to write about how you are worthy of songs and dances and plays to be written for your lack of wonder at war, sex or alcohol, you aren’t that interesting.

6. I am not going to write about the day you sat me down and dragged me down with you, just so you could complain about how much I loved angel wings and sketches of pretty eyes and generous eyebrows.

7. I am not going to write about pros or cons because honestly, I don’t see any point in giving you what you want anymore.

8. I am going to write about us. And it won’t be the list you asked for.

It will be a novel of a thousand pages, embedded in a million tears.
And honey, I was the only one crying.

I have memories of evil people I used to know. I wrote this for one of them, a somebody I used to know.

K always says write out my feelings and my memories and I will feel better.

I feel better. I would be lost without him. :heart:

Sometimes, a letter is exactly what people read. Especially when they request 'lists of pros and cons to being together'. Relationships are not about 'lists'.
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RVFanatic1 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
The more feeling you put into a story, poem, picture the better it will be. good job :).
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PennedinWhite Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Fantastic, darling. :)
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your writings are always so beautiful. :heart:
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Kailani-e Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This is a beautiful piece. Your pieces hold such raw emotion and strength. ^_^ I think writing out things do make you feel better. It is like a form of therapy.
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xXScar01 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
<3 <3 Beautiful :3

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LightOverpowers58 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Student Writer
Apparently people don't read the creator's comment anymore....and what a lovely, confusing, empowering work love....it's like we could feel what you felt.

Thank you for giving us this slice of yourself (as you so often do), I don't take it lightly. :hug:

:heart:
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PatternVSUser Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Actually, maybe if we all had a much more practical approach to our emotions we wouldn't waste so much time tangled in them.

Writing down/voicing your feelings is sometimes all you really need.
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RoseBeloved Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, this is excellently written.
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GypsieJenn Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
Beautiful writing. Thanks for sharing with us:)
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slowlyfallingpart Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
This is so utterly beautiful :')
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Shroomsta Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Some odd reason, dA is not letting me fave this? So I'm just gonna hop over and watch you (was planning to anyway) but please know I would very much have liked to be able to hit the "Favourites" button on this. Its awesome
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maryjayne530 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this a lot; nice job
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Crystal-Magic13 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

I've never been able to understand that.

There's so much more to each letter, to

each word, than can ever be put to paper.

Each letter is a letter, and part of a word,

and part of a message left there by a person,

and an echo of the reason they took their

time to put that message there, and a

reflection of who they are, and a piece

of their voices, which are directly connected

to their soul.

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1nkl1ng Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013
If I knew what to do or say in face of heartbreak, I would gladly share the information. Unfortunately, all I can tell you is this: you are not alone, and my goodwill goes with you.

I am certain that you will write many novels, and I think that they will be wonderful- but don't do it for someone else. Do it for you.
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Mockingbird1238 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow interesting. Are you ok? 
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nightshade-keyblade Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Trouble in paradise?
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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