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She speaks to me fondly
of passions and talents,
of guitars and stars,
with such breathless intensity
then stops short and
apologises
for speaking at all.


All because somewhere in her life,
someone she loved broke her heart
by ignoring
her beautiful words
and telling her to
shut up,
keep it down,
nobody cares.


People aren’t born sad.
We make them that way.
You are all so beautiful and so gifted and so talented. Please don't listen to the world when they deride you and let you down. I pray that you all speak your minds and are welcomed and loved for it by someone you hold dear. :heart:
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Sparia Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Student General Artist
really really love this! well done!
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mintybreeze Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
It's sad, because that's completely true. We come into full bursting, full of hope , of youth and joy.

How long we can stay that way is another matter altogether...
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
We sure do!
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Gahhh so beautiful! And the last stanza really brings the piece to the proper close!
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AthenaLovesHippies Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014
Beautifully written!!!
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hammer777 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014
"No, Stephen, I don't want to hear another word out of you!"
"But--"
"No buts!"

And that, kids, is how I gave up on my dream of becoming a Pikachu when I grew up.
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mintybreeze Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Oh you poor thing. 

I hope someone catches you with a pokeball soon...
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
"People aren't born sad.
We make them that way."

:heart:
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xTheJosing Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I can relate to this.. Beautiful, sad, but true. Great work!
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Hekabe Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Only reading this hurts so much because sadly it's so common...
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