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She asked him gently, “Do you love me?”
In his long silence, she found closure,
And left her love under a willow tree.
Sometimes, it is the simple questions that give us the answers that are most difficult to bear.

Let your burden go. 

You deserve better.

I found better in K. But it took a lot of hurt before I could be happy with him again. I am blessed to have someone like K to have made it easy.


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chromeantennae Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Gorgeous, Nikita, wow. <3
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CindyJade Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So few words, but they convey so much :+favlove:
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weirdandproudofit Dec 18, 2013  Student Artist
This short poem holds priceless advice... Love it. And I'm very happy for you, it's only after you've found someone like that that you realise how life should actually be. 
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:iconcomeonramblers:
This is so pretty and simple
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confidenceAlive Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)

There are no words for this
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entwiningbranches Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So true in thought. The way you describe the scene in such a short way that leaves the reader wondering and thinking is mesmerizing. Keep up the great work!
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mintybreeze Dec 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:heart: 
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snakeman1 Dec 7, 2013  Student Writer
I love this :) it really describes how my relationship ended after 2 years :/ 
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Echolalic-Ellie Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is such a lovely little poem.
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