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March 1, 2013
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Don't speak.
Don't move.
Don't think.
Don't dream.
Don't hold yourself together.
Don't fall apart.
Don't pretend it is all going to be okay.
Don't act like it won't be all right.
Don't touch me.
Don't look away from me.
Don't be so needy.
Don't be so grateful.
Don't act silly.
Don't be so serious.
Don't have so much fun.
Don't be so sullen.
Don't cry.
Don't laugh.
Don't smile.
Don't frown.
Don't love anyone too much.
Don't be so selfish.
Don't ignore me.
Don't love me too much.
Don't breathe.
Don't exist....

And hope? Hope is just a lie you tell yourself so that tomorrow, you can do it all over again.
All relationships are fucking complicated. Whether it is with your mother, father, brother, sister, husband, wife, boyfriend, girlfriend or friend. No matter how hard you try to make someone smile, no matter how much affection they get, no matter what you do. You are difficult, hard to please when you are broken and people will always want space from you when you do something even remotely small wrong...because you're just not the kind of person people want to be around.

{Let your lungs become glass...and feel them break on the inside...piece after painful piece.}
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godslove21 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
i agree with you :(
XomegaXX Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer woman would understand this. I only feel pain at being shoved outside.
NelehGrimm Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Student Writer
This is really touching and truthful in many ways. I hope the truth won't always stay reality.
Waterlily2544 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
So completely true!
Vhetin1138 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I tried to write some well-written comment detailing how I feel and how this piece resonates with me. But pain like this... it's not something that can be so easily transcribed into words. So I find it inspiring that you managed to do so.

Thank you for saying everything I can't.
B-Rabit Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
B-Rabit Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
PurpleObsessedNinja Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'd totally want to hang around you. You aren't difficult, you aren't hard to please. SO. Ahem. I think that's all.

OH! I looooove you! in a completely just friends over the internet way! :) hope you're okay.
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: Thank you my lovely. :)
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