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Don't speak.
Don't move.
Don't think.
Don't dream.
Don't hold yourself together.
Don't fall apart.
Don't pretend it is all going to be okay.
Don't act like it won't be all right.
Don't touch me.
Don't look away from me.
Don't be so needy.
Don't be so grateful.
Don't act silly.
Don't be so serious.
Don't have so much fun.
Don't be so sullen.
Don't cry.
Don't laugh.
Don't smile.
Don't frown.
Don't love anyone too much.
Don't be so selfish.
Don't ignore me.
Don't love me too much.
Don't breathe.
Don't exist....

And hope? Hope is just a lie you tell yourself so that tomorrow, you can do it all over again.
All relationships are fucking complicated. Whether it is with your mother, father, brother, sister, husband, wife, boyfriend, girlfriend or friend. No matter how hard you try to make someone smile, no matter how much affection they get, no matter what you do. You are difficult, hard to please when you are broken and people will always want space from you when you do something even remotely small wrong...because you're just not the kind of person people want to be around.

{Let your lungs become glass...and feel them break on the inside...piece after painful piece.}
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:icongodslove21:
godslove21 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
i agree with you :(
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XomegaXX Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
...my woman would understand this. I only feel pain at being shoved outside.
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:iconnelehgrimm:
NelehGrimm Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Student Writer
This is really touching and truthful in many ways. I hope the truth won't always stay reality.
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:iconwaterlily2544:
Waterlily2544 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
So completely true!
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Vhetin1138 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I tried to write some well-written comment detailing how I feel and how this piece resonates with me. But pain like this... it's not something that can be so easily transcribed into words. So I find it inspiring that you managed to do so.

Thank you for saying everything I can't.
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:iconb-rabit:
B-Rabit Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OSM!
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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:iconb-rabit:
B-Rabit Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:P
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PurpleObsessedNinja Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'd totally want to hang around you. You aren't difficult, you aren't hard to please. SO. Ahem. I think that's all.


OH! I looooove you! in a completely just friends over the internet way! :) hope you're okay.
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: Thank you my lovely. :)
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:iconpurpleobsessedninja:
PurpleObsessedNinja Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :) It's sincere! but how are you? I haven't talked to you in I don't know how long! News? What's new and exciting and daring and thrilling? (if you pardon the run on sentence. It's a phrase my mom passed on :))
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silveranklets Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
in the end people will judge you anyway, so live your life by impressing yourself. not others.

this can get confusing, but you'll eventually, hopefully, figure out what really makes you happy and what doesn't :)
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the kind words, my dear. :hug:
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:iconcrystal-magic13:
Crystal-Magic13 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well, you're the kind of person I want to be around. :hug:
I wish I could tell your mother, father, brother, sister,
husband, wife, boyfriend, girlfriend and friend, because it's true.
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!!! :hug:
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:iconcrystal-magic13:
Crystal-Magic13 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:glomp:
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LightOverpowers58 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Student Writer
The truth about love escapes the grasp of human understanding, yet forever we strive to unveil that which is held within the shadows.
"Let your lungs become glass...and feel them break on the inside...piece after painful piece." :iconsadhugplz: Sometimes it is only after glass breaks that we see true beauty in the shards left behind, awaiting the glue that binds. (though the breaths lost can never be regained, they can be captured in those breathless, cherished moments when we are momentarily whole)

Sometime we say "just give me a reason" but yearn instead to say "give me love"....

Hope is that infinitesimal thing...the thing that floats with the wind yet pads our heads at night...hope, is the thing with feathers (fleeting, mindless fluff)
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful. Your responses always are. :hug:
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:iconlightoverpowers58:
LightOverpowers58 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you, hun. :hug:
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:iconmintybreeze:
mintybreeze Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:thumbsup: Agreed.
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:iconlightoverpowers58:
LightOverpowers58 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you.
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:iconhippiesway:
HippieSway Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
You're so right, damn
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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:icondyskodelthunderback:
DyskoDelThunderback Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013
Some people cannot be pleased.
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Its true.
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:iconthe-mysterious-j:
The-Mysterious-J Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Do you have troubles with your boyfriend?
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sometimes, just like every other normal couple we argue. But we adore each other and that is what counts. :)
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:iconthe-mysterious-j:
The-Mysterious-J Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm glad :-)
I don't trust people who say "we never argue"
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LordOfTheRingsFan Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I think this can apply not just to relationships, but to life in general. It seems that all interaction with people is this way. As I get older I feel more and more afraid of doing something wrong, of not being what people want me to be. I'm afraid of disappointing people. And I'm afraid that if I'm not good enough for anyone, I will end up alone. So I simply do whatever people want, do whatever they tell me to, change into whatever they want me to be.

Sorry for such a long comment but I've been searching and searching for a way to convey this very concept, and you've done it beautifully. Nice work.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you my dear. That means so much to me. :hug:
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IntraSect Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
"The love cannot be lost," in dark, you pray.

Not glass, but ice and frost, your lungs inhale. Warmth and light always sought: once found, now failed. Actions perceived as taught and sight ...?

Shaped clay.

Can ancient battles fought bring their own pain?
Could there be other thoughts -- ones not-so plain?

Thinking themselves the cause, they run away.
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Phoenician88 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
You can listen to everybody your whole life telling you what an ideal relationship is and even when you are in one people tell you how to run it. So much pressure in society to find someone, settle down, buy a house, have kids......and then? Whats wrong with being single happy and living for yourself?

Somthing to think about.
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passing37 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
Sounds very familiar. Because I am a person many (women) just don't seem to want to be around.

And yes, I keep telling myself it will be better tomorrow, even though I know it won't.

Awesome stuff here, UU.
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silvioricardonelli Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
son todas prohibiciones. Es difícil vivir con tantos "no". Mejor buscar lo positivo. Excelente poema.
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RubyDaSquirlz Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student Writer
Yup.
To all of this.
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:iconmadmother88:
MadMother88 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I've felt that before, more than once
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pereubuisjesus Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Professional Artist
Goddamn. The Big Sad. The lack of control we have over other people. The hatred we have for ourselves. Our mediocrity. How trying to do things right never works. How ontology just fucking hurts.
Lots of thoughts.
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Feienin Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you for writing this. You're always such a beautiful person. If someone can't see that , then it is them who has the problem, they're all twisted on the inside. :hug:
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thatwierdanimeotaku7 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this reminds me of a friend i have
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Alisher3402 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
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at least the hope is the last to die.
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AdynDtrio Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
This happen to me about 3-4 years ago, not about relationship but I still remember that falling (not feeling, really.)
I feel you... :'( *hugs*
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Skullcandy1995 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student
Like it :)
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AlienSkull Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This summarizes how emotionally overwhelming a relationship can be.
However, if you manage to find someone better than the rest, things can have a little more hope.
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captainalstro Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
I really love this poem, really captures the constant flipping of emotions of a relationship. This is easy to relate to.
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:iconbaconmagic:
BaconMagic Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
I'm really glad I'm not in a relationship.
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moonmystery Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can relate...but....those things are just small obstacles everybody encounters at some point in their lives. And... I guess to continue living happily, this is a trial to see if you will be able to survive despite others' wishes.

Hope you feel better...if this is about you.
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sumarlegur Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
bad.
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signalspells Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student Writer
Yes, you will always be difficult because people are difficult. I'm difficult, your difficult, K is difficult. Okay love? Love is difficult.
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Demon-Play Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student General Artist
I get that entirely
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