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"I am the boy who wants to love
your misshapen words,
your broken hearted pieces,
and
your ink split fingers.

I am the boy who wants to kiss
those scar tattooed arms,
that tear stained face
and
mend what has been broken.  

I am the boy who can
and will
make your heart
sing poetry again."

If only he would say it
now
like he had
then.
Ah, the one that got away is back again. :) I've been having trouble posting deviations lately. :P

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CATSAREGREAT Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow - this is absolutely incredible.  I love it!
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AsterDew Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Student General Artist
nice writing
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is just absolutely incredible, Nikita. Gah, you're just too good. :love:
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sarcastic-Assassin Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013   Photographer
I don't know how you do it, that raw emotion formed into words that just work perectly in a poem. And I feel like it has to be real, isn't everyday life the best muse one could ask for? Maybe it's the background of dA, or the snow outside, but this poem takes me away to some of those mountains in your manipulations. Thank you for sharing.
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maryjayne530 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful writing, as always :)
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carmennge Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's beautiful...and I know a boy just like that who is like that still :)

The last stanza is sad though. The title of the poem really matches the mood in the end. 
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thibaultletiec Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013
So... is it bad if i want her to get broken (i mean her heart or something like thatn, not that i want her to die) so i can "mend what has been broken"? 
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MenollySagittaria Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes.
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ErictheLucario Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I am that boy, too.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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