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"I am the boy who wants to love
your misshapen words,
your broken hearted pieces,
and
your ink split fingers.

I am the boy who wants to kiss
those scar tattooed arms,
that tear stained face
and
mend what has been broken.  

I am the boy who can
and will
make your heart
sing poetry again."

If only he would say it
now
like he had
then.
Ah, the one that got away is back again. :) I've been having trouble posting deviations lately. :P

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:iconcatsaregreat:
CATSAREGREAT Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow - this is absolutely incredible.  I love it!
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AsterDew Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Student General Artist
nice writing
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is just absolutely incredible, Nikita. Gah, you're just too good. :love:
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sarcastic-Assassin Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013   Photographer
I don't know how you do it, that raw emotion formed into words that just work perectly in a poem. And I feel like it has to be real, isn't everyday life the best muse one could ask for? Maybe it's the background of dA, or the snow outside, but this poem takes me away to some of those mountains in your manipulations. Thank you for sharing.
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maryjayne530 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful writing, as always :)
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carmennge Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's beautiful...and I know a boy just like that who is like that still :)

The last stanza is sad though. The title of the poem really matches the mood in the end. 
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thibaultletiec Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013
So... is it bad if i want her to get broken (i mean her heart or something like thatn, not that i want her to die) so i can "mend what has been broken"? 
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MenollySagittaria Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes.
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ErictheLucario Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I am that boy, too.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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Cammie-Pink Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013   Artist
this is a very touching poem. 
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much, my dear. :)
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:iconlingtina:
LingTina Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Simply beautiful!
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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:iconlingtina:
LingTina Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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:iconciro-luocos:
Ciro-Luocos Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013
It would be wonderful if every girl had a boy like this by their side =]
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: I agree.
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anunnaki888 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
hellz yeah I love girls with tattoos too soo sexy when a girl has pictures all over her body sooo attractive and sexy
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Timberlyn Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I did love it. You words flow very nicely together
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: Thank you so much. :)
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THEHEARTSREASON Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Student General Artist
Beautiful.
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:) Thank you!
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MarianaFuzaro Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Professional General Artist
perfect
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, my dear. :hug:
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irrenderNarr42 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
since we know where your inspiration comes from, having trouble posting isn't a bad thing, eh?;)
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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irrenderNarr42 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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JERUKA9 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
 so awesome its remains me the same style of write by deviantart :weirdandlovely you and she have the same style of writeing :o (Eek) anyway good art
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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BohepansTheZeroth Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013
That's...that's absolutely lovely. I really like that.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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WolfOfTheMoons Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So beautiful!
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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WolfOfTheMoons Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Anytime!
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:iconautumnpocky:
AutumnPocky Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Describes my current situation with the words that my mouth fails to form.

So beautiful... thank you so much for writing this. ;u;
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:cuddle: Thank you. :)
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snowflower-princess Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
<3 <3
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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charlomilk Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Student
i would never want to date someone who romanticizes my depression
in the end do they really care about you? or do they just care about being like some teenage romance novel
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Astro-Creep166 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsopsplz: so many feels
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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Steamland Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Student General Artist
awe, sometiems, its ahrd to see the oens we care for, the oens who got away love to shwo up in our lives randomly i suppose. Amazing poem. 
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much, my dearest. :)
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Steamland Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student General Artist
welcome my Angel :3 
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Finland1010 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
Wow.... I mean... Wow
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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Finland1010 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
:)
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xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
...And I am the girl who is in love with this poem. Beautiful. Well done <3
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! :heart:
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