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because she is a broken pretty thing,
and he is the little boy who grew up
mending
treating,
loving
broken things.
Its been a long time since I have written something. But today was one of those days that I needed to write something. I have missed you guys. Times have been tough financially and I've been working 9 am to 11 pm shifts to make as much as I can. The summer will definitely be better and easier...fingers crossed. :(

As forever, for K.
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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TheLonelyRoad16 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Simply, shortly, true. Beauty and sorrow, harnessed from the core. Very, very nicely done. :thumbsup:
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confidenceAlive Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely to see a little of you again (:
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely to see you too!! :)
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IanabelleIsaK Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014
Beautiful, I can relate.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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CivilWidow19 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014
Although I am mending myself with his help and support, there are times I still feel broken.

Thank you for putting my thoughts in words.  ((hugs))
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for reading this. I hope you and he can heal all that is broken together. :)
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kaelamae Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Student Writer
You never fail to compose perfection!
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for saying that! :)
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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thoughtsfromthebarn Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
After browsing this site for several months (read creeping), I've found this piece to be so resounding that I had to finally comment on something. So pure and simple, yet so deeply complex...Thank you for sharing this inspiring work with the world, maybe one day I might be so brave.
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onechance145 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Student Photographer
This is absolutely beautiful! Heart 
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so very much, my dear. :hug:
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TheAstrologist Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
Very beautiful. :heart: Lots of emotion, thanks for sharing.
-Elizabeth
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much, Elizabeth. :)
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MorganColene Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Student General Artist
love it
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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matt-pixels Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Student Digital Artist
This poem is beautiful, thank you for sharing it.. :-)
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!! :cuddle:
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Rainbowflower333 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Really nice poem.

This is so funny I loged in an saw your poem and I read it, then I decided to put it into my favourites and now I see that I'm already "watching" the person who wrote these wonderful lines.

Isn't that awsome I so-called found you twice, because your work is like a magnet to me and I'm the metal :) !
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I am so so pleased to hear you enjoy my work so much!! :hug:
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salsabeard Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
This is beautiful and reminds me of my broken love because....

She still moves me now as she moved me then, even though shes moved on
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:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so sorry. There is nothing more painful than love lost. :heart:
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DyskoDelThunderback Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
Always a pleasure to read your work.

As for finances, keep your head up and keep praying. :cuddle:
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much, my dear. :heart:
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DyskoDelThunderback Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
Any time, my friend. :hug:
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TicklishEight Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
This is beatiful!
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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mintybreeze Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I missed your words! It's really rather short but its still lovely. Hope everything goes well for you.Huggle! 
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much, my dear!!! :)
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cosmosgrl19 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
hope it gets better for you, dear! and this is, as always, very well written :heart:
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much, my dearest! :hug: I've missed you!! :)
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cosmosgrl19 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
i've missed you, too :3
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
mhmm - this is quite well written. Short in its execution but deep in meaning. I would have liked to see this extended a little, perhaps adding another similar portion but I think it is good enough as it is. Fingers crossed.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much as always, my dear. :)
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You are always welcome :heart:
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pre-heresyKharn Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Professional Artisan Crafter
THIS. LOTS AND LOTS OF THIS. I don't know who you are, but you clearly understand things most people don't. hats off to you.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! I suppose when you've seen the dark side of the world, you learn more about the light. :)
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pre-heresyKharn Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Professional Artisan Crafter
damaged goods & soul medics, and the occasional damaged medic, need to stick together. from the way you write, you know what it's like to try to patch someone up. :hug:
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:iconthe-ephemeral-knight:
Felt as if you were talking about me.
I like it; simple & deep, yet carries a possible complex of love because she is broken.
I don't know, just a rambler passing through.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for taking a look at this. I always felt that the world puts too much emphasis on 'perfect' love, whereas the truth is, love is anything but perfect and thats what makes it perfect for the two souls in love. :)
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:iconthe-ephemeral-knight:
If anyone reads this comment,
please reply with that gif of the guy clapping because that was perfect Q(T^T )!
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Mikami01 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014   Writer
I love this..
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, my dear. :)
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WhiteMinos Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
aww very nice
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :heart:
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WhiteMinos Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem :)
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237-IndefiniteTruth Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Student General Artist
Lovely work. Heart  I don't know you but if this is your writing and you haven't written for a long time then I missed you too. Hug 
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